Hamza Naser Ahmed ID: h00137326
English 125
Assessment criteria for portfolio depend on three steps which are Appearance, Organization and content. If these steps are perfect, you will get A(+/-) certainly, and if they are bad, you will fail or you will get bad grades. In this essay, I will write about the reasons that make you fail in assessment criteria for portfolio.
There are many reasons make you fail in assessment criteria for portfolio, and I will write some reasons. The first reason is that, non-typing your ID, name and the contents of the binder on the spine or front cover of the binder. The second justification is that, without contents page to help the user, that’s make your binder is very complex and very hard to understand it, so be sure your binder has contents page. The last reason in my essay is that, the contents don’t show evidence of care or order and there are important materials are missing that make your binder like a garbage, so you should put all important materials without any missing and in order.
Finally, from what I had written, you can see many reasons that make your binder fail in assessment criteria for portfolio, and I wrote three reasons of many reasons, and if you want your binder pass, you must do the opposite. ….222 words
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Hi Hamza,
ReplyDeleteRegarding your procedure, the length was 222 words. The limit must be 150 words. In addition you have to make space between each pragraph. The grammar is fine and the linking words.That's it.
Thanks
Hi Hamza,
ReplyDeleteyour essay is very good in general, its more than a 150 words. but I've noticed that you are repeating sentences and words again.
You have some grammer mistakes that you need to edit. In additional, You might use more linking words.
Wish you the best in your studies
Re,
Yousef Alabri
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